就修改下语法和罗嗦的地方应该没什么大问题In”UniqueSolutionstoPollution”(LectureReady2,2006),thelecturermainlydiscussestheproblemofairpollutionandtreesareagreatlowtechnologysolutiontoairpollution.Thel

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就修改下 语法 和罗嗦的地方 应该没什么大问题
In”Unique Solutions to Pollution” (Lecture Ready2,2006),the lecturer mainly discusses the problem of air pollution and trees are a great low technology solution to air pollution.The lecturer also explains the process of how SO2 is formed and becomes acid rain.SO2 can cause damage for both people and the environment.And trees provide both environmental services and economic benefits.Trees help people save money,reduce temperature,and lower home electricity bills.

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It mainly discusses the problem called air pollution in "Unique Solutions to Pollution"(Lecture Ready2.2006),and the trees as a great low technology solution to that.THe lecture also explains the forming process of SO2 and acid rain.It is generally konwn that SO2 can do damages to both our human beings and the environment.As an offer of providing both environmental services and economic benefits,Trees help people reduce the expenses,control the temperature,and lower home electricity bills.