帮我修改一篇文章(很短,就语法改改错,还有让语句变得更优美)AnothervividexampleistheheroicdeedsofBobMarley,whoiscalledthenationalheroofJamaicaandtheancestorofReggae.Hewasrememberedforhisuprightindividu

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帮我修改一篇文章(很短,就语法改改错,还有让语句变得更优美)
Another vivid example is the heroic deeds of Bob Marley,who is called the national hero of Jamaica and the ancestor of Reggae.He was remembered for his upright individuality,pursuit of dreams,and contribution to music and the third world.The person who affected Bob Marley's childhood most was Joe Higgs.He taught Marley how to play guitar and engraft a belief about “the same god,the same goal and the same fate”.It is this belief that held black people and the third world people such as Jamaicans together.As a result,it was added into Bob Marley’s music later.1976 was the election year of Jamaica.At that time violence and crime filled the whole country.Since Bob Marley’s music lyrics were concerning about people’s miserable life and the inability of the government,the authorities declared that his music was illegal.Still he insisted on helping the people.A concert should be a good idea.The April of 1978 were of extraordinary significance to Marley.

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