短文改错注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处Cverytouchingincid以下正文:Averytouchingincidentshappenedinourclasstoday-thefirstdayofthisteam.Attheendoflastterm,itisreallycold.duringa

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短文改错注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2只允许修改10处C very touching incid
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A very touching incidents happened in our class today - the first day of this team. At the end of last term, it is really cold. during a class, one of the student, Zhang Li,found that our teaches Mr Lin’s hands had been hurt because the boldness. Mr Lin is a good teaches respected by many student,included Zhang Li, so she decided to make him a pair of gloves by the hand. she finished that on the winter holidays . Today she handed her gift to Mr Lin, that was moved to tears.We were moved, either.I think Zhang Li set a good example to them.We often forget to thank people who are around us daily ,but we actually should be grateful to their everyday help
会的人帮忙做一下,谢过、

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incident,it was really,one of the students,our teacher,because of the,a good teacher,and respected,many students,including Zhang Li,by hand,who was moved,we were moved,too,
a good example to us.
楼主可能有你自己打错的,因为一共不止10出错误.我按照顺序改的,你慢慢订正.