句子改错,语法好的进,谢谢.竞争是与生俱来的,就连小孩子也不例外,而且身为一个赢家,他的背后本身就应该就有批评的声音.competitionisbornwithamanbesideslittlechild,andmoreover,itisnotuncommontha

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句子改错,语法好的进,谢谢.
竞争是与生俱来的,就连小孩子也不例外,而且身为一个赢家,他的背后本身就应该就有批评的声音.
competition is born with a man besides little child,and moreover,it is not uncommon that to be a winner must surround by critical voices.
不知道这样说行吗?to be a winner 好,还是being好?
还是这样好.
compete is instinctive,including little child.there has plenty of person envy of winner criticizes them a lot.
还是这样.person加s吗,including用在这里适合吗?plenty of 可以这么修饰可数名词吗?criticizes用加s吗?

谢谢回答,好的加分

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be born的主语应该是人
besides 除（某人[某事物]）之外（还有),用在这里不合适.
身为一个赢家 being a winner,或者可以直接说Winners ...
sb is surrounded by sth
* Man is born with competition.It is true even with little child.Moreover,it is not uncommon that winners should be surrounded by critical voices.
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compete是个动词,不能单独用
including也是要有一系列同类的的列举,之后再including ...
there 和 has不能这样用
person的复数就是people啦
plenty of 可修饰可数和不可数名词
envy 做动词,也不能直接用原型
criticize在这儿不是做谓语,要用现在分词形式
后半句也可以这样说
* There are plenty of people envying the winners and criticizing them a lot.
或者
* There are plenty of critical voices surrounding the winners.