一道英文改错题,最好写上原因,一共十处.分可能有点少,but,如果需要,等我转来分,再给你~IwassohappywhenIgotaletteronmybirthdayontheMay12,2000frommymominChina.IcometotheU.S.in1992.Thatwastheeight

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一道英文改错题,最好写上原因,一共十处.分可能有点少,but,如果需要,等我转来分,再给你~
I was so happy when I got a letter on my birthday on the May 12,2000 from my mom in China.I come to the U.S.in 1992.That was the eighth time to celebrating my birthday in the U.S.My mother's letter brought her so much happiness.In that letter my mom wrote about a lot childhood memories.When in China,my mother always celebrated my birthday with a simple meal,hoped that I would grow up to be health.During those celebrations,I also got some gift from my grandparents and relatives.Before that,my mom passed away,but I still continued to celebrate my birthday with her letters every year.

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I was so happy when I got a letter on my birthday on 【去掉the日期不用】 May 12,2000 from my mom in China.I come【came时态错】 to the U.S.in 1992.That was the eighth time to celebrating【celebrate不定式】 my birthday in the U.S.My mother's letter brought her【me我快乐】 so much happiness.In that letter my mom wrote about a lot 【加上of】childhood memories.When in China,my mother always celebrated my birthday with a simple meal,hoped【hoping状语】 that I would grow up to be health【healthy】.During those celebrations,I also got some gift【gifts复数】 from my grandparents and relatives.Before【After之后】 that,my mom passed away,but I still continued to celebrate my birthday with her letters every year.