whocanhelpme?Thefollowingsentencecontainsatleastoneproblem,whocansuggestabetterversion?1.Therearevariouschoicesforaprosperousjob.2.Thisemotionmaybringpeace,tranquillitytothewholeworldunsensibly.3.Iamafraiddbeingin

Question

who can help me ?
The following sentence contains at least one problem,who can suggest a better version?
1.There are various choices for a prosperous job.
2.This emotion may bring peace ,tranquillity to the whole world unsensibly.
3.I am afraidd being in love in college may lead to my degeneration.

Answer 1

1.There are NUMEROUS choices for a prosperous job.
2.This IDEOLOGY may bring peace ,tranquillity to the whole world.
3.I am afraid A LOVE LIFE IN COLLEGE WILL lead to my degeneration.