帮我看下我的presentation下礼拜要给老外看的Helloeveryone,todayiwillshowyoumypresentationaboutAfricanpoor.Iwasinteresthistory,wheniwashighschoolstudent.Iwanttoknewwhatitisrarelyknownbypeople.especially,like:

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帮我看下我的presentation 下礼拜要给老外看的
Hello everyone ,today i will show you my presentation about African poor.I was interest history,when i was high school student.I want to knew what it is rarely known by people.especially,like:European colonial rule war and hero.Today i just briefly explain everyone about why is the African so poor.
why is the African so poor?Although Africa is rich resource like oil gold and diamonds,when we study in class,the African children take up guns fight the enemy or suffer from hunger or starvation.A variety of reasons lead African poor.Like:war natural disaster and history etc.
First,it is important reason that European colonial rule.The colonisation of Africa has a long history,the most famous phase being the European Scramble for Africa during the late 19th and early 20th century.A million of Africans were slave and them were sold to America.Meanwhile African a number of resource was been plundered.
\x05Next point is fever war.Some warlord and dictator want keep control country.them
unleash a war,but despite their people suffer from hunger and disease.like Congo and Uganda.
Last but not least,is natural disaster.The horn of Africa drought killed between 50,000 to 100,000people in five months,more than half of them children under five,and according ti frank report from aid agencies,many of these deaths would have been avoided by quicker response from the international community.

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以下是我自己的看法,我以前也经常做prezentation,加油啊!.Hello everyone ,today i will show you something about Africa .I was interested in history,when i was a high school student,I want to knew what is rarely known by people.especially like:European colonial rule war and hero.Today i just briefly explain everyone about why Africa is so poor.
why is the African so poor?Although Africa is rich in resource like oil,gold and diamonds,when we study in class,the African children take up guns fighting against the enemy or suffer from hunger or starvation.A variety of reasons lead African poor.Like:war natural disaster and history etc.
First,the important reason is the European colonial rule.The colonisation of Africa has a long history,the most famous phase being the European Scramble for Africa during the late 19th and early 20th century.A million of Africans were slaves and they were sold to America.Meanwhile a number of resource was been plundered.
\x05Next point is fever war.Some warlord and dictator want to keep control of the country.they unleash a war,but despite their people sufferring from hunger and disease.like Congo and Uganda.
Last but not least,is natural disaster.The horn of Africa drought killed between 50,000 to 100,000 people in five months,more than half of them were children under five,and according to frank report from aid agencies,many of these deaths would have been avoided by quicker response from the international community.