这句话看看有没有病句或者用词不当?Theaseriesofcomplicationsarisingfromthedisaster,castaunsuspectedgloomovertheJapan.

Question

这句话看看有没有病句或者用词不当?
The a series of complications arising from the disaster,cast a unsuspected gloom over the Japan.

Answer 1

冠词的使用有不少错误
改成
The series of complications arising from the disaster,cast an unsuspected gloom over Japan.
句首的 the 和 a 只能用一个 the series 特指
unsuspected 元音开头,用an 修饰
国家名前面无须冠词 去掉 Japan前面的the