我英语很烂.想努力学好.每天写一篇日记.求修改错误的地方~Itwasawindyday.Iwearschooluniform.Ifeelreallycold.Mydeskmatealwaystalkwithme.Ithinksheisinfluencingme.Butidontknowhowtocommunicatewithher.Myph

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我英语很烂.想努力学好.每天写一篇日记.求修改错误的地方~
It was a windy day.I wear school uniform.I feel really cold.My deskmate always talk
with me.I think she is influencing me.But i don t know how to communicate with her.
My physic is my worst subject.I dont know how to learn it.I understand something and i dont want to ask teacher.I think physic is difficult and boring.I am not interest in physic.what should i do?

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第一句用了 "was" 过去时态,可是之后的wear 、feel就变成一般现在时了,应该保持时态一致,最好都用过去时. 下一句的意思有点不明确,原句翻译过来是“我认为她在影响我,但我不知道如何与她沟通”,想表达的具体意思让人...