帮我看看下面一段有没有语病.谢谢Look,howbeautifulitis!Bluesky,greentrees,widesea,whitesandsandsoon.Haveadeepbreatheandtherearesomanythingscanletusfeelrelax.Imagineyouarelayinginthesunorplayingthebea

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帮我看看下面一段有没有语病.谢谢
Look,how beautiful it is! Blue sky,green trees,wide sea,white sands and so on. Have a deep breathe and there are so many things can let us feel relax. Imagine you are laying in the sun or playing the beach volleyball. Do you want to join us?

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Have a deep breath (breathe是动词,改成名词）.There are so many things which can make us being relaxed(一个句子只一个主语一个谓语动词,其它改为从句和其它动词形式）.Imagine you are laying in the sunshine...