一小段英文,请指正错误.Weshouldwidenourprofessionalcomputerlabimmediately.Sinceourschoolbecometoarealuniversity,thequantityofUFV’sstudentsarebecomingbiggerandbigger.Therefore,moreandmoreCISstudentsneedtouseco

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一小段英文,请指正错误.
We should widen our professional computer lab immediately.Since our school become to a real university,the quantity of UFV’s students are becoming bigger and bigger.Therefore,more and more CIS students need to use computer to do their labs or programs at campus.However,we now have a very small professional lab which can only allow eight people do labs in the same time.Some students even have to reserve a space before two weeks of the lab time.I see lots of CIS students complain about this status on their MSN space.Now,it’s time to widen or rebuild a bigger computer lab.Anyway,this action will attract new students join this program and government may imburse campus for doing this befitting conduct.

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1、become应该用became,因为成为一所real university是已经发生了的事,2、the quantity of UFV’s students are becoming bigger and bigger这句话显然是中文思维的产物,呵呵,最好改为如：the annual enrolment of s...